government should spend money on railways than roads

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kind

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of

vehicle

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have improved and there is a question about

on

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which kind of

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the

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should spend money

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railways

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transport

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should get more attention and the

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kind of

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.

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essay will discuss why the

government

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should spend money more on

trains

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rather than on

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transport

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. First of all,

railways

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is safer than

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, the biggest number of accidents has the road vehicle,

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the

princess

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of Wales Diana tragically died in

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accident and million other lives too.

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have more

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as transportation the huge amount of goods,

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after mining hard coal, it

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transport

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by train because

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have a lot of space rather than lorries and obviously cars.

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,

railways

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transport

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pollute

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less CO2 and other detrimental gases, which

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our ecosystem.

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are more

convinient

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long

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, you are not stressed because of not sleeping and driving a car

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have an opportunity to sleep

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having a pillow, a

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a toilet

in

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so you do not have to stop

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petrol

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station. In conclusion, I want to say that the

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should get more money because there are more

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of it and the

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should invest in its

developing

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as

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do not cause so much huge detrimental problems to our environment and people's lives.