Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that some

people

believe many young

people

try to take a

gap

year

after finishing high school before entering university to experience work or to go travel;

this

experience will help them to broaden their knowledge when they

finally

enter higher school.

This

essay will examine the reasons why I partially agree with

this

statement.

To begin

with, nowadays, a

gap

year

become a normal action. Many young

people

try to take it for several reasons

such

as to gain work or travel. They use

this

time to discover what they really want.

For example

, someone has two options when he wants to continue their study in university, in science or social subjects, to make sure what he really wants, he needs more time to figure out and find the answer with work in both fields.

As a result

, they will know more about what they really enjoy and be more responsible for what they choose.

However

, a

gap

year

is not always a wise option. Postponing their education will lead them to some problems in the future.

For example

, someone who uses their

gap

year

for travel uses her time to have fun and sometimes forgets what the point why she takes a

gap

year

is, and

then

she will feel left behind and still struggle with his education when his friend already has a nice job and stable income.

Furthermore

this

will make them unconfident and sometimes pull out of social life.

To conclude

, a

gap

year

is a great choice if young

people

know what are the consequences when they postpone their education.

However

, taking a

gap

year

has some drawbacks as well, related to social life.

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