The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The given table illustrates forested
area
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areas
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in six different parts of the world in 1990, 2000, and 2005.
This
will account
in
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millions of hectares (000,000 ha).
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
Europe
and South America had the highest forested
land
, and
Europe
also
was the only area
which
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in which
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the
land
became bigger
in
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each year. Meanwhile, the smallest forest
areas
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area
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was Oceania.
To begin
with, two areas had more than 900
million
ha of forested
land
; those were
Europe
and South America. Even though, in 2005, the number of
land
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decreased to 882
million
ha for South
Ameria
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America
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,
while
the figure rose to 1001
millions
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million
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ha for
Europe
.
Moreover
, Africa and North America had more than 700
million
ha, and
this
number almost remained stable in the
last
year. The forested area in Asia was almost
a
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half of
Europe
's forest
land
which was 576 to 584
millions
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million
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ha.Oceania just only had around 200
million
of
foreseted
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forested
land
.
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