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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The given table illustrates forested
area
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areas
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 in six different parts of the world in 1990, 2000, and 2005.
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 will account
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 millions of hectares (000,000 ha).
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, it can be clearly seen that
Europe
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 and South America had the highest forested
land
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, and
Europe
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also
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 was the only area
which
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 the
land
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 became bigger
in
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each year. Meanwhile, the smallest forest
areas
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 was Oceania.
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 with, two areas had more than 900
million
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 ha of forested
land
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; those were
Europe
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 and South America. Even though, in 2005, the number of
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land
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lands
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 decreased to 882
million
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 ha for South
Ameria
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America
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,
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 the figure rose to 1001
millions
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million
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 ha for
Europe
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.
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, Africa and North America had more than 700
million
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 ha, and
this
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 number almost remained stable in the
last
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 year. The forested area in Asia was almost
a
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half of
Europe
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's forest
land
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 which was 576 to 584
millions
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million
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 ha.Oceania just only had around 200
million
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 of
foreseted
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forested
land
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, land, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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