Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?
It is considered
as
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apply
the
library which is used by general people and the finance Correct article usage
a
is
used for its renewal services Unnecessary verb
apply
are
unwanted. with the development of Correct subject-verb agreement
is
technology
, these libraries
can be taken over.
Library
is a place where all kind of Change the article
A library
information
is available. It usually have
scheduled timings which make the user Change the verb form
has
to
adjust their timing. Change the verb form
apply
Accordingly
time consumed to find Add a comma
,Accordingly
a
specific content is a lot making it Correct article usage
apply
user unfriendly
. Often, it may happen that required Add a hyphen
user-unfriendly
information
is not available. For example
, once I was searching for information
related to my thesis work and I hardly found anything.
Technology
is a source through which we can do various activities. it can be used any time
and Correct your spelling
anytime
also
anywhere making it easily accessible for the individual. Technology
contains bulk
of Add an article
the bulk
information
. Targeted context can be made available at fingertips
by the use of Correct article usage
the fingertips
internet
. Numerous Add an article
the internet
libraries
are present which make
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makes
the
public Correct article usage
apply
libraries
useless due to
no confined, timings person does not need to disturb their schedules, such
as for
children in Change preposition
apply
encyclopedia
Add an article
an encyclopedia
like
features are ready to use on gadgets.
Change preposition
apply
To conclude
by taking into consideration, Add an article
the advantage
an advantage
advantage
given by Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
technology
over the physical libraries
, it will not be wrong to say that services will be more used by the community than old
room of bookshelves. Add an article
an old
the old
Thus
, it will be of no use to invest huge money in its restoreation
and other activities.Correct your spelling
restoration
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