The map below shows the development of the village between 2009 and 2014.

The map below shows the development of the village between 2009 and 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village between 2009 and 2014.
The maps illustrate substantial changes
of
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the village between 2009 and 2014.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the town was changed to be more residential. In 1995, there were
a
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farmland and a forest park located in the east and
a
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housing
were
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in the west. Next to the forest park,
where
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is the southeast, had a hotel and a cafe. The places where people can go
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shopping were the
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side of the hotel, comprising shops and a fish market. Moving on to the present map, there is a significant development, mostly several accommodations were built. The farm and forest were replaced with
golf
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field and tennis court.
The
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right side of the hotel, a car park was constructed for
hotel’s
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the hotel’s
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customer
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.
Shopping
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centre was demolished and replaced with restaurants and apartments in the southwest. The sea became clear without any constructions.
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, the housing and cafe are located in the same location as in 1995.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • evolution
  • seaside village
  • infrastructure
  • housing estates
  • commercialization
  • amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • demographics
  • sustainability
  • preservation
  • urbanization
  • tourism
  • accessibility
  • conservation
  • gentrification
  • land use
  • residential areas
  • urban planning
  • ecological footprint
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