Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditiond are difficult, such as the Sahar desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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In the current fast-paced world, many travellers are interested to explore severe weather climatic lands.

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as abandoned cities, citadels, deserts, and ice-formed places. There are advantages and disadvantages, to travelling to those lands. In

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essay, give more information on

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topic. On the one hand, to travel to unexplored places, people can get knowledge on the weather and surrounding places information. And, they can find out new species.

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, many people don't know about the Kolas, living in Australia. It got popular

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when tourists exposed them by photos and videos and social media.

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, that particular land will be developed by plenty of travellers to come and stay there. It can be helpful to the government to get noticed by popular things. Most scientists are exploring precious and useful materials from there.

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, humans, damaged most of nature by littering. With flooded people, nature protection cannot be recovered or reformed.

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, earlier in the Antarctic, more seagulls are living there. Once it got a destination for tourism, coral life was damaged. Most of the visitors take food from seafood.

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got affected the imbalance of nature life.

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, in the Amazon forest, a century before more tribals are living. After the tourist ,visits more tribals got killed or moved to another location. To sum up, travelling to new sites will make adventure and happiness,

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as human beings, we have to protect and save the species is our responsibility.

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, every government should keep rules and monitor to not damage the environment of any sites.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditiond are difficult, such as the Sahar desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Your opinion

Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?

Some people think painting and drawings are important as other subjects. They should be compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

107.Some say that music is a good way of bringing people from different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.