It is an undeniable fact that every living thing on
this
earth Linking Words
need
to be protected and well-treated. Animal cruelty has become a serious threat nowadays.,Change the verb form
needs
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however
there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society believes that animal Add a comma
,however
experiments
should be banned.Use synonyms
while
others emphasize that vital scientific discoveries can be possible Linking Words
from
animal Change preposition
through
experiments
.Use synonyms
this
essay will examine connected facts for both views.
On the constructive part.society is blessed with medical breakthroughs which are mostly possible via Linking Words
experiments
on Use synonyms
animals
.Use synonyms
to begin
,Linking Words
with
research on cows helped to end smallpox.,Change preposition
apply
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likewise
studies on monkeys,dogs and mice led to the polio vaccine.Add a comma
,likewise
secondly
,fifty years ago,kidney diseases were considered fatal and took the lives of 20000 Americans annually.today kidney disease can be treated and managed for a long happy life.to illustrate Linking Words
this
point those suffering from chronic kidney failure must receive dialysis a few times a week to remove toxins from the blood.the invention of dialysis would not have been possible without dogs because they were the first Linking Words
animal's
dialysis was testedChange noun form
animals
with
. Change preposition
apply
Thirdly
,surgical procedures,pain relievers,psychoactive drugs, insulin, and pacemakers all have been developed and tested in Linking Words
animals
before being used in humans.
On the destructive part.there Use synonyms
appears
to be Correct subject-verb agreement
appear
a potential shortcomings
of Correct the article-noun agreement
potential shortcomings
a potential shortcoming
this
trend.chiefly, animal tests are so unreliable.the National Institute of Health(NIH) has noticed that 95% of all drugs that are shown to be safe and effective in animal fails in human.because they don't work or are dangerous. Linking Words
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Furthermore
each year inside British Laboratories around 3 million Add a comma
,Furthermore
animals
are used in research and every 8 seconds,one animal dies.which is not justifiable.Use synonyms
although
various technological advances allow the replacement of animal tests Linking Words
such
as cell culture,bioengineered organs,stem cell technology, and computational and mathematical models.
In ,Linking Words
conclusion
I would say Add an article
the conclusion
a conclusion
animals
should be used in Use synonyms
experiments
with great caution. Use synonyms
Alternatively
substitutes of these can provide effective and efficient results.Add a comma
,Alternatively