The use of mobile phones should be banned in public space such as libraries, transportations, and shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People are split when it comes to mobile

phones

. Some might assert that the usage of

this

gadget should be blocked in public areas

for instance

libraries, transport vehicles

as well as

stores.

On the contrary

, others may disagree with a number of justifications a viewpoint with which I entirely agree. On the one hand, mobile

phones

are the most popular devices in today's world.

Initially

, they have revolutionized the way of communication and people can stay in touch with their family members or friends easily wherever they want.

Moreover

, individuals can use different types of communicating ways simultaneously

for instance

text messages and video calls or even experience surfing the web all in one. Admittedly, usage of the mobile

phones

can have other objectives rather than calls. Primarily, they are not just self-

phones

they are a camera, a voice recorder, an iPod and other gadgets

as well as

an accessory at the same time.

In addition

, gaming purposes with the advent of game applications and even addiction to a wide range of society is not inevitable. Some might argue that The use of mobile

phones

should be banned in public spaces

such

as libraries, transportation, and shops since they can trigger a number of problems

for example

disturbance especially in a quiet place like a library or their wave damage. In my opinion;

however

,

this

idea is rather groundless for a number of rationals mentioned above.

To sum up

, in conclusion, I personally tend to agree with the opponents of banning self-

phones

in public spaces because they are beyond mobiles and the benefits of them outweigh the drawbacks,

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