While in some countries children start school at the age of four, in other countries they start at the age of seven. Some people believe that starting school early affects the relationships between parents and children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of starting school early and give you own opinions.
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it has some advantages.
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, starting education early has some advantages too. Linking Words
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3rd
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the 3rd
age
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. 3 year old kids can understand some simple Use synonyms
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informations
faster than younger and older ages. Professionals say that parents should not miss these ages.
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school
early has advantages Use synonyms
on
academic success and Change preposition
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apply
disadvanages
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disadvantages
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on
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for
relationship
between family members. Families should think about that and they should calculate which one is heavier.Fix the agreement mistake
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