Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is often thought that humans have many
choices
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these days. I strongly agree
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this
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opinion and I will discuss my thoughts on the statement.
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with, the availability of technology has brought about
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in our everyday life
choices
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.There are many websites, brands and platforms that influence our preferences nowadays.
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, there are different types of mobile phones that can help you make decisions
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like iPhone,
sumsung
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, techno and
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. Someone who likes taking pictures will like a phone with
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good camera quality so he or she will have time to think and
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on the type of phone to buy.
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,
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would have been impossible if there was only one handset available all over the world. It would have had a toll on the individual who would have
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to purchase
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.
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, these phones listed above have
their
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features that can help with your choice description.
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, technology now
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an influence
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our daily life
choices
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.
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, the influence of peer pressure
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an impact
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our
lives
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life
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options. One can plan for an event or program but meant ask a close friend
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her cloth choice.
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, I remember my sister asked me
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my opinion on her wedding dress and event
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some time ago and
on
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my reply, she became confused as to which one she
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to choose from. Again, a friend's choice of career path would have much effect on someone who
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planned much about their future plans because there
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lot of options to select from. In conclusion, I agree
to
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the statement above that nowadays people have too many
choices
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because of access to technology and peer pressure.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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