The government pay tuition fees for university students. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The world witnessing inflation since everything become expensive,
such
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as rent,
fees
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, transport, and others, and
that is
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lead to more focus on the financial aspect for all people, here in the essay I will discuss the pros and cons of paying the
fees
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instead
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of
students
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for their universities. First of all, the first advantage that the
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trying to do, by paying the
fees
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for the universities, will make
students
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' life easier, since they are not forced to work part-time or full-time to fulfil the uni's requirements,
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: Most of the
students
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who travel abroad are working to pay their
fees
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, expenses and other to achieve their goals.
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, the
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is motivating
students
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to focus on their studies by paying
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of them, since a number of
students
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even not thinking to
study
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owing to the fee of the
university
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, so by doing that, the percentage of the
students
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who achieve their goal will be increased, and the country
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will benefit from their knowledge to achieve more successes.
On the other hand
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, the
students
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who do not care about their
study
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,
university
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life or even the years they are being in the
university
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, by doing so, they are occupying seats in the departments, which lead to some other
students
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forced to travel abroad to
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in
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faculty,
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, I had forced to travel abroad because I did not get the chance to
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in my country,
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, not all the
students
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will feel the responsibility even to complete the
study
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since the
government
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pay
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of them,
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, some
students
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arrive to the second year
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leave the
university
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to join other faculty or even work.
To conclude
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, I agree the
government
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should pay the
fees
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instead
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of the
students
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, to be motivated, but the
students
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must occupy the seats to achieve their goals and not take
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opportunity
instead
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of other
students
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.
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