The map below shows the development of the garden between 1980 and 2023.

The map below shows the development of the garden between 1980 and 2023.
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The two maps illustrate the
garden
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prior to and following the development from 1980 to 2023 . It's clear that there have been several significant extensions added and replaced
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of the renovation of the
garden
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over the years. Turning to the details. In 1980 trees which located northeast in a greenhouse . But now chairs, decks and barbecues are erected near trees. In the past, there were two flowers
garden
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that had been situated southeast and southwest in a
garden
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. And these days,
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place changed to Playground and Bush. In 1980 there have been three benches nowadays added one bench. In the past, there had been two gates which lie in the western and southern parts of a
garden
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.
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, by 2023, these roads have been without gates.
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