In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In the highly developed universe, standard
life
expectancy is enlarged. The downside is a decrease in
life
satisfaction
due to
the constant pursuit of more material possessions and the most viable solution
of
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this
is to lower
standards
and enjoy
life
. Day by day countries are developing and at the same
time
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standards
are increasing. Two out of three
people
work hard to live in a good house and earn a high amount of money and
also
parents make their children
to
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be well educated even
they
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have other desires.
Thus
they sacrifice both their time and their lives.
This
leads to them always being stressed and their relationships with loved ones decrease so they don't enjoy their
life
. Resources show that raising the standard of living above the basic subsistence level doesn’t allow individuals to thrive and societies to flourish. To tackle
this
issue world population should stop competing for their lives with each other and
also
should decrease
standards
. It is better if
people
standardize their living conditions and
then
continue to live in balance. Because it doesn’t make sense to sacrifice our future for a comfortable
life
standard. From my point of view,
people
should utilize modernization for
better
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quality
life
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of life
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. The key difference between
standard
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the standard
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of living and quality of
life
is that standard of living is primarily focused on a person's income, education level, and access to goods and services,
whereas
quality
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of
life
is focused on a person's
overall
well-being, including factors
such
as happiness, health, and community. In conclusion, the enlarged
life
standards
make our universe unlivable.
People
must find ways to live in the best conditions without destroying their lives. We come to
life
once and we should know its worth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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