The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The given line graph compares information about closed shops and
new
opened shops in a particular nation from 2011 to 2018.
Change the adjective
newly
Overall
, the number of shop
closures and new opening
experienced markedly fluctuate over the period and closed Fix the agreement mistake
openings
shop
showed significantly dipped.
At the beginning of the period, new opening shop
reached Fix the agreement mistake
shops
at
approximately 8,500 and it rapidly decreased after one year Remove the preposition
apply
at
4,000. In 2012, opened Change preposition
to
shop
increased the Fix the agreement mistake
shops
follow
two Change the form of the verb
following
year
and it stood Change to a plural noun
years
just
over 6,000 before Change preposition
at just
declined
Wrong verb form
declining
untill
2015 Correct your spelling
until
at
4,000. Eventually, it experienced Change preposition
to
remainded
relatively steady for two years and fell again from 4,000 to 3,000 in 2018.
Correct your spelling
remained
However
, in 2011, the number of closed shop
was around Fix the agreement mistake
shops
at
6,400 before Change preposition
apply
reached
its peak at over 7,000 in 2013. Wrong verb form
reaching
According to
in the year 2015, it notably dipped around
500 before slightly Change preposition
to around
declined
from 2013 and it noticeably rose Wrong verb form
declining
agian
and it remained stable Correct your spelling
again
around
5,000 Change preposition
at around
at the end
of the period.Submitted by kim88974150 on
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