The chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1985 and 2015.
The chart demonstrates the changes in fitness
membership
according to
gender in Thailand between 1985 and 2015.
Overall
, by and large men
’s membership
exceeded women
’s before the 2ooo year while
the opposite is right after
this
year except in 2010 which had the biggest number
of both genders.
First of all, the number
of women
started at a modest number
in 1985 was approximately one thousand. Whilst the men
were doubled of that. The situation had not changed a lot in 1990 according to
the difference between sexes however
the membership
in both of them multiplied to become 2000, 4000 for women
and men
respectively.
Obviously, there was another trend in 2000 when women
's membership
overrode men
’s. in more ,details the first one was about 2800 while
the second was 2800. In 2005, it is clear that
there was a bit of difference between men
and women
as both were around 2000. Five years later, the number
of memberships of men
jumped to 5000 which is the highest in all years but these related to women
were a little under 3000. Last
but not least 2015, we finished with a result which was opposite to what we started. In other words
, the number
of women
’s membership
became doubled that of men
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