The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anomake comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
amount
of stores that closed and the Change the quantifier
number
number
of new outlets that opened between 2011 and 2018 in one country.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there was a fluctuation between shop openings and closures in the given time period. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there was a switch in the position, with the former’s period (2011) having store openings at the top and the latter’s (2018) changing to outlet closures.
Regarding shop openings, the Linking Words
number
of new stores reached 8,500 in 2011, and Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
number
plummeted quickly by 4,500 outlets (to 4,000) in 2012. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the trend rose considerably and reached Linking Words
by
2,000 in 2014 before Change preposition
apply
dropped
to 4,000 in 2015. Wrong verb form
dropping
Then
, the graph remained stable in 2016 and slightly increased in 2017, after which it declined by 1,000 to 3,000 in 2018.
Turning to store closures, there were fluctuating trends between 2011 and 2014 before the Linking Words
number
plunged rapidly by 6,000 shops in 2015. Use synonyms
Then
, the trend climbed significantly by 4,500 stores in the following year, and after that, it remained constant at around 5,000 outlets between 2017 and 2018.Linking Words
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