The chart below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart presents the proportion of
households
with owned electrical appliances in three types, washing machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
and the amount of spending Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
time
of
housework in a Change preposition
on
week
by households
in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, there was a
Change the article
an
increased
of using electrical appliances by Change the form of the verb
increase
households
. However
, the time
spend
in a Change the form of the verb
spent
week
of housework by households
has decreased between 1920 and 2019.
Regarding the percentage of households
used
electrical appliances, we can see that consumption Correct pronoun usage
that used
washing
Change preposition
of washing
machine
increased slightly around 30% from 1920 to 1960, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
then
fluctuated between 1960 and 2019. Furthermore
, using of refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
climbed dramatically towards the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
time
period, going from 0% to 100% and from 30% to 100% between 1920 and 2019, respectively.
Turning to the amount of spending time
of
housework in a Change preposition
on
week
, there was a dramatic decline around
30 Change preposition
of around
hours
per week
(from 50 hours
to 20 hours
) between 1920 and 1960, after that decreased slightly around
10 Change preposition
to around
hours
from 1960 to 2019.Submitted by frens on
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