Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is argued by some people that the world
population
growth exponentially soared contributing to unsustain and having a significant impact on global problems,
while
others believed that
this
trend can bring benefits to global's economic and societal development. I remain firmly believe that
this
trend has both sides effect and I will examine it in
this
essay. To be perfectly honest, Many people think that
population
issues are one of the most pressing problems facing our world today.
To begin
with, two major factors, in
this
case,
this
case are land space and food availability. When it comes to land space, the accessibility of feasible areas to dwell and build residences in some countries is difficult , it makes the state forcefully forest clearing and convert them into new residential which is bringing a negative impact on environmental biodiversity.
Furthermore
, the soaring
population
creates another problem
such
as food scarcity to fulfil people's needs because of an imbalance of demand and
production
.
As a consequence
, in some countries especially in the African region and southeast Asia often to be found in malnutrition cases, and it
also
has a negative impact on children's intelligence.
Thus
, I believed a crucial factor to mitigate
this
challenge is birth control and ensuring their quality of life by providing their basic need, so it will make the country more reliable and sustainable in the long run.
On the other hand
, It's important to bear in mind that the
population
also
have pros consequences for some industries' profit, online shopping
for instance
, by increasing product demand will eventually bring high revenue and
production
activities.
Moreover
,
this
trend will attract some investors to come and make a business. To illustrate, In ,Indonesia there is a specific region which is quite an over-populated area, which makes
this
area has abundant labour availability, labor plays a crucial role in
production
cost
due to
plentiful availability making the wage cheaper compared to other industrial region.
Thus
, both parties take their every mutual benefit, job opportunities for the labour and cheap cost
production
. In conclusion,
although
some benefits are offered by
this
development,
while
the downsides still surprise the upsides and emerged to several crises in the world, I remain certainly believe that the increase in the
population
should be mitigated to prevent a global crisis and unendurable.
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