The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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As an introduction, the pie charts demonstrate the sources of
income
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and expenses of a children's charity society in the USA, during the year 2016.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the total amount of revenue was higher than the total expenditure.
In addition
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, the largest proportion of
overall
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income
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came through donated foods,
while
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most of the money was spent on programme services.
Firstly
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, out of the total
income
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in 2016 ( 53 561 580 dollars), 86.6% was received from donated foods,
while
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the community contributed 10.4%.
Secondly
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, the remaining 3% was from programme revenue, investment
income
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, government grants and other sources, where each resource allocated money at rates of 2.2%, 0 2%, 0.2% and 0.4% respectively.
On the other hand
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, the total expenditure was 53 224 896 dollars, which was slightly lower than the
income
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. Out of that, 95.8% was spent on programme services,
whereas
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, the rest was on fundraising and management and general by 3.6% and 1.6% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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