Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some parts of society nowadays state that having competitive

skills

is a must for

children

while

others assume that co-operate

skills

would become more beneficial for their adulthood.

This

essay will discuss both of these points of view

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and from my perspective, I agree that having teamwork

skills

are more convenient for

children

’s

future

. In terms of

children

’s

future

, competing sense is sometimes considered by some people as

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important skill to learn because they expect their

children

to have a bright

future

.

For instance

,

children

are forced to compete to be the first rank in their class and their parents hope that in the

future

, their

children

will always fight to be the number one in all fields.

However

, technically some of the kids will do everything to achieve their parents' goals for them, including bad things

such

as cheating, dropping their classmates and constantly seeking recognition. These could be

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that continuously becomes a part of them.

On the other hand

, I believe that having collaboration

skills

will bring a positive and better impact on the youth's

future

.

While

competing requires them to win, collaborating demands the kids to work as a team and lift each other up.

For example

, solving a problem as a group will make them think about the solution

together with

good communication

skills

.

As a result

, they could adapt to society when they grow up and become a collaborative, cheerful and positive person which is very important to build a strong relationship with their teammates in their company.

To conclude

,

although

the young ones may need both cooperating and competing

skills

for their adulthood, I firmly assume that youngsters who are taught to team up will more likely become useful people in their adulthood.Given

this

situation, I recommend that teachers should focus on teaching pupils about how to cooperate with others.