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Some people believe academic success depends mostly on having a good teacher.others argue that is is the attitude of the student that matters most.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Acquiring knowledge is dependent on a person's behaviour and
also
 natural ability. The majority of people believe that academic achievement is associable
teachers
.
On the other hand
, others think that
students
' approach is the main factor to learn a new activity that they want to study. In
this
 essay, I will examine my both views of these two statements which I believe should be considered seriously. Private school
students
 tend to gain more
acknowledge
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 than public school pupils, which means that they have good
teachers
 who lay more emphasis on their
students
' attitudes. In Mongolia,
for example
,
Although
 all kinds of public schools have their own way
that is
 learning in some ways, private school is the still best choice for children's education because it gives more opportunity.
However
,
teachers
 are the main key to
attain
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 their dream. A study shows that academic success is paramount for pupils if they have affordable tutors. Even though you have a good teacher, it doesn't mean that you will learn quickly. It is related to the effort and discipline of the
students
.
Nevertheless
, it's
also
 important that attitude is the best way to upgrade ourself's personality.
For instance
, I myself used to be a person who has less attitude but I've changed a lot because of a good teacher.
In other words
, it is crucial having a good teacher
as well as
 a pupil's concept.
According to
 research conducted by the Department of the University of Harvard, it is scientifically proven that many countries like Mongolia ought to emphasize their nurture. In conclusion, we should not only emphasize their desire but
also
 their obsession. Both attitude and good
teachers
 are important,
however
, the pupils' learning way is the key of
get
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 success.
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