The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts illustrate the ordinary expenses of
United
Kingdom's citizens in two different years, 1971 and 2001 respectively. As is observed from the chart, the expenditure on petrol and furniture reduced significantly Correct article usage
the United
while
the amount spent on computers increased.
Initially
in 1971, British people spent 36% on petrol which was the highest percentage among the given Add a comma
,Initially
expense
categories. Their expense
on furniture placed the second rank at 32%, afterwards, spending money on restaurants occupied the third rank in their expense
categories. The least amount spent by them was in
Change preposition
on
computer
which was only 7% in mentioned Fix the agreement mistake
computers
year
.
After 30 years, in the first year
of 21th
century, the Change the ending
21st
expense
on
furniture and petrol Change preposition
of
reduced
to 8% which is significantly lower than the percentage in 1971. but the Add a missing verb
was reduced
expense
on
computers Change preposition
of
have
been Change the verb form
has
double
. The expenditure for books added to the category Wrong verb form
doubled
in
Change preposition
apply
this
year
. spending money on restaurants considerably decreased to% compared to the
25% in 1971. The cause of Correct article usage
apply
this
reduction could be the
spending more on preparing food at home. The highest amount spent in 2001 by UK people was Correct article usage
apply
in
Change preposition
on
Add an article
the car
a car
car
and that consists almost half of the total Fix the agreement mistake
cars
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
in
Change preposition
apply
this
year
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