The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.

The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts illustrate the ordinary expenses of
United
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Kingdom's citizens in two different years, 1971 and 2001 respectively. As is observed from the chart, the expenditure on petrol and furniture reduced significantly
while
the amount spent on computers increased.
Initially
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in 1971, British people spent 36% on petrol which was the highest percentage among the given
expense
categories. Their
expense
on furniture placed the second rank at 32%, afterwards, spending money on restaurants occupied the third rank in their
expense
categories. The least amount spent by them was
in
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computer
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computers
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which was only 7% in mentioned
year
. After 30 years, in the first
year
of
21th
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century, the
expense
on
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of
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furniture and petrol
reduced
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was reduced
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to 8% which is significantly lower than the percentage in 1971. but the
expense
on
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computers
have
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been
double
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doubled
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. The expenditure for books added to the category
in
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this
year
. spending money on restaurants considerably decreased to% compared to
the
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25% in 1971. The cause of
this
reduction could be
the
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spending more on preparing food at home. The highest amount spent in 2001 by UK people was
in
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on
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the car
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car
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cars
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and that consists almost half of the total
expense
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expenses
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in
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apply
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this
year
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expense, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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