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the chart shows components oF GLOBAL DOMESTIC PRODUCT in the UK from 1992 to 2000. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart shows components oF GLOBAL DOMESTIC PRODUCT in the UK from 1992 to 2000. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 provided bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated from IT and the
industry
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service
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 in the UK from, 1992 to 2000, in a period of 8
years
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. It is measured in percentages.
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, it can be seen that the percentage of IT and the
industry
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service
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 from GDP rose over the given time, IT’s rise was at a higher rate than the other ingredient. At the beginning of
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 period, in 1992,IT accounted for 6 per cent of GDP,
whereas
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industry
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service
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 was slightly lower than it at 4 per cent. For the next four ,
years
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 both components became nearly similar between 6.5 and 7.5.
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 to that, in 1996, in spite of a decline in IT percentage compared to its previous ratio, in 1994, it still was higher than
industry
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service
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. In the following two
years
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 from 1998 to 2000, the patterns of the two components were remarkably different.
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, there was a sharp increase in the proportion of IT in comparison to the
last
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years
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, the variation in the ratio of
industry
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service
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 was a minority. On top of that, in 2000, the ratio of IT to GDP was twice the
industry
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service
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.

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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words industry, service, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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