The diagram below shows the stages involved in producing one bottle of wine.
The diagram depicts the progress that how to create a bottle of wine.
Overall
, there are 8 steps to accomplish a wine bottle consumed in the supermarket which begins with collecting the number of grapes in the garden and ends with delivering them to the market.
First and foremost, people harvest 400 ripe grapes which will be squeezed to make 3000ml juice, then
the wastes are made to become compost. In the next step, the liquid is sent to a system for fermenting within 2 weeks. After that, the fermented liquid will be pressed with high pressure which is reduced to 1000ml of liquid. The remaining unwanted components are once again thrown for compost.
In the final periods, the 1000ml of liquid is given to a filter, then
people leave this
fresh liquid in barrels. Obviously, wastes after filtering will be composted at last
. Subsequently
, the alcohol in barrels was measured into 750ml bottles. Finally
, these bottles of wine were transported to publicity.Submitted by aim7lva on
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