Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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achievements

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experimentation with real living

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species

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many people argue that it is important to protect animal rights.

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of the treatments can be done from plant

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use of animal testing.

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many people will believe that we still need to tests on animals,

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assure that many remedies can be developed

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experiments

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decreasing the risk of creating a virus mutation.

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cells mutate,

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escaped from labs and jumped into humans.

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medicine is increasing the

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are actually used in many biological studies,where they are based

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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248 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

scientific breakthroughs
ethical concerns
alternatives
animal testing
moral implications
ethical considerations
vivisection
research methods
ethical dilemmas
animal welfare

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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