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Some people think that zoo are cruel and all zoos should closed.However, some people think zoo can help protect animals Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #zoo #zoos #animals
While
 few believe that it is very harsh on the
animals
 to be enclosed in
zoos
, others think that
zoos
 are
a
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safe
place
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 for the
animals
. Even though
zoos
 are very popular nowadays, in my opinion, it is always better for the
animals
 to stay outside.
This
 essay will outline different viewpoints before deciding on what is the best solution.
Firstly
, there are a few that consider
zoos
 as a threat to
animals
due to
 the enclosed spaces in the
zoos
.
Animals
 are supposed to live freely and in larger spaces. Keeping them in
zoos
 will affect their mental ability
as well as
 their growth.
Although
zoos
 try to allocate the necessary areas for the
animals
, it is always hard for them to do the same for each and every
species
 in the zoo.
For example
, the polar bear is an animal that only lives in colder weather and it will be heavy maintenance for the
zoos
 that are in warm locations.
On the other hand
, some argue that
animals
 are supposed to be in
zoos
 as they can get food in time and will be free of any infections or diseases.
For instance
, every zoo has its own designated veterinary doctor who checks all the
animals
 regularly and makes sure that they are healthy.
Also
, by keeping the
animals
 like lions, tigers, etc.,
zoos
 are saving the lives of other
species
. In my opinion,
zoos
 are beneficial for some
species
,
however
, they should not try to capture the
animals
 for the sake of the public
but
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,
instead
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 they should focus on helping and growing the
species
 that are on the verge of extinction.
To conclude
,
zoos
 are entertaining for
a human beings
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, but
animals
 have the right to live their life on their own.
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