The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the earnings of five different professions in the UK,
whereas
the table provides data on how many hours
these professionals work
weekly (average) along with
their salaries after three years. Overall
, underground drivers and firefighters
make the most money while
nurses make the least earns, whereas
firefighters
and teachers work
more hours
a week
than other professionals.
The bar chart states that Underground drivers and firefighters
make the highest amount of money among the five categories. These two earn around 50,000 (underground driver) and 40,00 (firefighter) without experience and approximately 51,000 and 42,000 dollars after three years of working. Police and Nurses are the two lowest paid jobs at around 21,000 (*22,000 after experience) and 15,000 (*18,000 after experience) dollars, respectively; however
, nurses increase most in salary after years of working.
The table, on the other ,hand displays that both teachers and firefighters
work
longer hours
than other people in the other sectors here. These professionals both work
55 hours
a week
, followed by police who work
40 hours
a week
. Even though the bar chart showed that Underground Drivers make the most money, they also
work
the least hours
per week
at 36 hours
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