The table below shows the income and jobs generated last year by tourism in Canadian states and territories.

The table below shows the income and jobs generated last year by tourism in Canadian states and territories.
The table depicts how much Canadian tourism earned the net profit and created employment from the previous year in ten provinces and territories.
Overall
, it shows a positive correlation between the amount of income and job production. It is apparent from the data the number of earnings and careers were by far the most in Ontario at $59.797
M
(Million) and 226.781
jobs
, compared to the rest of the places. Following, the three areas
such
as Quebec, British Columbia, and Alberta made relatively similar profits, $5.357M, $4.913M, and $3.063M, respectively.
However
, the proportion of the created
jobs
was slightly higher in Quebec at 130.018, in these three places (96.877 in British Columbia, 69.308 in Alberta). It is a revered pattern of generated incomes and
jobs
in Nova Scotia, Saskatchewan, and Manitoba that even though fewer created
jobs
, they earned higher incomes at $683M (16.636
jobs
), $677M (18.063
jobs
), and $590M (22.628
jobs
), respectively. In terms of the figure for the profits and job production in New Brunswick, Newfoundland, and Territories were the least number, apart from the created
jobs
in New Brunswick,
this
place still had a higher number of job opportunities compared to those small areas.
To sum up
,
according to
the data from the table, the ten places in Canada produced $76.102M and 606.527
jobs
in total in the Canadian tourism industry.
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