using animals to test the safety of cosmetic or drugs used for medical reasons is never acceptable. To what extent do you agree with this statement.
In today's ,era some people think that they should encourage
teenagers
to help some communities
by doing some of their work
in their free time as they think that it will help both communities
and youngsters in different ways. I totally agree with this
statement and I will discuss this
topic in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, I would like to say that teenagers
should definitely do some volunteer
work
for some communities
because with these little unpaid ,jobs
they can learn a lot which will help them in their future like when they will start looking for their jobs
they can add these volunteer
work
in their resume which will help them find a good job
as well as
employers going to be really impressed with these unpaid job
so they can find their first job
as quickly as possible. For ,example if a person helped in a public library they going to learn how to work
as a librarian so it is going to be really easy for them to get a job
either as a librarian or in a bookshop because of their volunteer
work
experience. Furthermore
, teenagers
will learn time management skills which is a good skill for adding to their resume as well as
will help them in the future as well when they will work
part-time and continue their studies in college.
Moreover
, it will be very helpful for public communities
to get volunteers for their help because it is really hard for them to find a job
these days when everybody is so busy people are doing multiple jobs
these days because of inflation so nobody wants to arrange some time for volunteer
jobs
and old people cannot do such
jobs
because of their health issues. As well as
it is really hard for some communities
to pay for some jobs
so they cannot afford to hire an employee. For,instance in Canada the minimum wage rate of a labour job
is around $14 to $15 which is a lot for public communities
to afford if they are not earning much.
In conclusion, I would like to say that this
idea is really good for both teenagers
and communities
as both will get lots of help from this
like communities
do not need to pay anything and teenagers
going to learn a lot.Submitted by simar.preet1204 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite