Some
think that constructing fast
between
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of money and should spend the money on developing existing public transport,
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groups claim that there is nothing bad in building new railway lines. From my point of view, I agree with the latter view for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.
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other
offers a better life for all
around the country. One of the major
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is to reduce
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, especially during public
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to the
on the road.
, the fast
will be a better alternative to get away from the
.
, taking very fast
would help
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like a bus.
, building new railway lines not only causes
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transportation faster
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the country.
,
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mostly decide to visit only one or two
because of
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distance. They need to spend a long time between each place.
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could visit many more
easier by the fast
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economy.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that it is a waste of money to construct new railway lines for very fast
because it provides many benefits to
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and the country
as reducing
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more time, and
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the economy
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.