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Some people believe that money is the best gift for teenages while other disagree. Discuss both views.

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Some people think that give
money
 better as a present but other people believe that
this
 idea is not good. In my opinion,
Although
, there is the best gift for young. Other gifts give better is actually important. On the one hand, many people to want give
money
 as a gift to
teenagers
.
For example
, buy books and need things for education. They feel good near their friends because of going to cafes, restaurants and other places.
Teenagers
 can buy independent clothes sneak and other things. Build freedom life give need beginning
money
.
Money
 needs in teenage time.
On the other hand
, some think that not giving
money
 to
teenagers
 because youths use it for the wrong purpose, and they might enter a bad way ,
for instance
, dangerous gameplay on the internet. If parents give
money
 to
teenagers
, they will get used to it and they cannot build their future life. Pocket
money
 given irresponsibly and carelessly can cause many unwanted problems. It has been observed that youngsters, who get lots of pocket
money
, misuse and abuse it. Since they are young and inexperienced. They are liable to misuse the
money
 in unhealthy and bad ways. They may get addicted to dissipation
such
 as drinking, smoking and gambling. In conclusion,
Although
 giving
money
 is the best gift. Pocket
money
 giving can cause big problems.
Therefore
 both choices are true.
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