Some people hold that we should spend the amount of time and money on the protection of wild animals. Some people argue that they should be spent on human populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While
it has long been debated whether we should be working to save Linking Words
wildlife
or improve the living conditions of humans, I tend to believe that Use synonyms
wildlife
should have a role to play in the world and Use synonyms
therefore
, investing in protecting Linking Words
wildlife
and maintaining the diversity and balance of life in ecosystems is our responsibility.
On the one hand, it is easy to understand why some would argue that humans should have a higher priority than all other species on Earth. It is undeniable that there are indeed many problems that need to be solved around us, Use synonyms
such
as backward infrastructure, urban traffic congestion, high housing prices, medical services for the elderly, etc. All of which require the state to invest a lot of money. In Linking Words
this
regard, governments should not be distracted by other issues but should allocate limited funds to improving human living standards.
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However
, despite the plausibility of Linking Words
this
claim, it does not mean that improving human life should come at the expense of ecological balance and the survival of other animals. We must not ignore that the extinction of other animals will have harmful consequences. Linking Words
For example
, if there were no snakes and owls, there would be no natural enemies of rats in the fields, which would lead to reduced crop yields. Famine in poor countries would not be solved. Another factor we cannot ignore is the loss of species diversity, which may have a knock-on effect on biological and natural science research in the long run.
In general, I would reiterate that we should consider human life and Linking Words
wildlife
conservation equally.Use synonyms
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task response
Ensure you fully address the prompt by discussing both sides of the argument and providing a clear stance. Your introduction and conclusion could be strengthened to better reflect the content of your essay.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the organization of your essay by clearly structuring your arguments and providing a more cohesive flow between paragraphs. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas more effectively.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite