Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to him to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter:  Apologize  Explain the situation  Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket

Dear Sukainah, I am so delighted to hear from you and I am
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glad that things are working out for you . Thank you very much for
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me to
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to a theatre tomorrow
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I have an appointment with my family which is tomorrow I am not available to
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a
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theatre with you
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, in the evening I will go to work to finish my daily reports which
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take me over 4 hours to finish them . I
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know
you are a special friend to me but I haven’t any idea
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do I wish I could do something to make the day longer . I would like to suggest
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my little sister you met her in the
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last
month to
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with you
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theater
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she
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really like to go
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theater
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I hope to understand
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this
situation . Thank you again for
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me Yours sincerely, Ruqayah
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