Governments should lower arts budgets to allocate more money to education. Do you agree with this view?

It is believed

art

budgets

needs

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to be reduced to increase

money

spending

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for

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education

. I can not say that ''I completely agree with

this

opinion''

however

, there are some acceptable sides

of

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this

recommend

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. Budgets planning to spend

for

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artificial things should be decreased but

it

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they

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should not spend

for

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any other thing unless

governments

have to spend it. From my point of

view

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governments

must reduce their all

spendings

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spending

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because

governments

earn

money

from

tax

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taxes

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and it is the citizens'

money

. Politicians administrate

governments

so they decide

that

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where taxes should spend. As I have mentioned taxes belong to citizens and no one can spend

other

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ones

money

as

logical

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as

owner

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.

Therefore

governments

should lower arts budgets. They should not interfere

artists

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with artists

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because when politicians have

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the rights

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rights

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to spend the

money

most probably they will spend it for

artist

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supporting them

instead

of successful or talented ones.

As a result

of

this

art

will be affected negatively.

Also

if

governments

quit

spend

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other ones'

money

for

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supporting

artists

,

artists

will not be

effected

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because companies already support successful

artists

.

For example

in my

country

government shares taxes with

artists

supporting them.

Due to

the fact that

,

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art

has not been improved enough

although

, in The USA government does not waste

money

and their productivity is much more than my nation experienced. On the other side, if

governments

have to spend

this

money

they should spend it for

education

rather than spending it to

art

. As it is mentioned in the first paragraph spending

money

for

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art

does not help to

improving

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art

but spending it

to

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education

better than other

spendings

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spending

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because new generations will live in the

country

and if they will not

qualified

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the

country

will experience being unsuccessful in every crucial part of life including

art

. Recent research sign that some supportive materials needing technology like videos or slides can be helpful

for

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improving

understanding

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capacity of students.

However

, no one does not sell technology for free so

money

is needed thing for reaching technology. In conclusion, it is

common

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belief that

governments

should spend more

money

for

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education

and they should create

financal

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financial

source

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sources

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with

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decreasing

money

spending

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for

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artificial things. I do not totally agree with

this

opinion but I do not support every

parts

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of

idea

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. I define

my self

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as a liberal and I do not want to give rights about spending my

money

to the politicians but I

have

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not enough power

for

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obstacle that.

Art

or

education

it

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is still

spended

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by someone. At least I hope they will spend it

for

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education

because it is more important for my

country

's future.