Some people think that the only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that only way to improve

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on our roads is to give much stricter

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on driving offences. I completely agree with

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statement considering the two main points I have thought of: given that many of the

drivers

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' small lack of attentions cause unwanted

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.

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with, the factor that causes

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are usually divided into two main reasons. The most common, driver's lack of the attention: the other factors could be summarised as driver's intentional maneuver. Specifically for the first reason: the current

drivers

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who are already used to public roads, sometimes, their lack of attentions can be

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described as giving less importance to their actions; the process of maneuvering vehicles.

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these bahaviours, these

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are less feared and not realising the fact that they are in a charge of the killing machine. To counter

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behaviours, stricting the

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are very effective

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the quickest solution.

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, some of the entitled

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are now compromised as they start to fear the consequence to what they might do and start to pay respects on what they are doing. For the

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some of the insane

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who are causing harms to the

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safety

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intentionally; some are triggered by the small incidents that occured on the

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. These type of users can often act based on their instinct.

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, they somehow constructed their own basic standard of treating the

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as not important as much. These behaviour, possibly by having the light

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, can result on the

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accidents

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and the harm to the

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of it.

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,

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problem can

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be cured by stricting the law. Once the insane

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realise; the law gives them harder consequnce, the numbers of

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should be reduced as well.

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, stricting the law of punishing the faulse on these mis-behaved

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can significantly reduce the risk of

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and should be able to keep the

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safety

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at consisntent level.