The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
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The bar chart illustrates how many sea creatures
such
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as seals,
whales
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and dolphins populated the Gormez Straits between 2006 and 2018.
Overall
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, it may be highlighted that throughout
this
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period the number of dolphins soared, the
population
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of
whales
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remained roughly the same and the figure for seals fluctuated, but by 2018 aligned with approximately that of 2006. A closer look allows us to see that dolphins were continuously and steadily increasing their numbers which more than tripled by 2018, that was the record for the whole period in question. As for
whales
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, their
population
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did not change significantly, as there were always around 20-30
whales
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in the Gormez Straits throughout the 12-year period. Seals,
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, experienced both a decrease and increase in
population
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,
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, their numbers plummeted by roughly 50% by 2010 and amounted to 25 individuals. Afterwards, they commenced to evenly bottom out with a number of 35 in 2014 and 45 in 2018,
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merely recompensing for the loss in the
population
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words whales, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Recorded
  • Gormez Straits
  • Fluctuation
  • Seals
  • Whales
  • Dolphins
  • Height
  • Individuals
  • Steadily declined
  • Relatively stable
  • Lowest
  • Significant increase
  • Approximately
  • Slight recovery
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