You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation

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Dear Sujan, Hope all is well at your end. First of all, I would like to thank you for your immense support during my long vacation. I have recently returned home after a one-month vacation in the Maldives, and all the credit goes to you only as I have asked a few other friends for a favour but they denied it except you.

However

, by accepting my proposal you have proved that our true friendship still exists. I was a little bit worried that who will gonna take care of my grandparents during my absence since they are quite old and can not do their basic things without other's support. No one was there to take care of them

besides

me since my parents are staying in another city for employment purposes, which is very far from my home.

Therefore

, I heartily appreciate your favour in that difficult situation. I know as a friend you will not accept any gifts.

Therefore

I invite you for dinner next Friday and guess what it will be at your favourite restaurant Apple Bees. My dear friend, I humbly request you to come at any cost. Hope to see you next Friday. Best Regards Shiba

Submitted by Shiba Kc on Sat Jun 17 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

201 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.

Do the advantages of using technology for communication outweigh the potential negative effects on personal relationships?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that government funding should not be used for supporting Art & culture, while others think that supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own openion.

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?