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Life is now better than it was 100 years ago. to what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is true that
life
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 at
this
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 current
time
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 is way better than it was a decade ago. In my opinion , I partly agree with
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 statement
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 both eras having their own advantages and downsides. On the one hand,living conditions got better with sophisticated technologies that help with everyday chores or intricate tasks. Nowadays we can use a washing machine ,
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 of doing it manually.
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, the Internet made
life
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 easier with lots of different tools in it.
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,we don'
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 have to wait a big amount of
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 to send letters to our beloved ones.
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,we don'
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 feel that much stress and anxiety
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 fewer problems -
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 as poverty or world war and so forth-as it was 100 years ago.One example of that, people had to survive during these tough times,as my grandmother said that they had to consume food or everyday
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 needs at the bare minimum.
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,we still cannot deny that we face other types of problems ,
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 as bullies on social media or fake information about lots of things. But human-being didn'
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 feel that much strain like
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 at that
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.
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, people spent
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 on other things like reading a book or having more
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 with their family. As long as we don'
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 spend
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 on physical activities,we might have more health issues now;than the people that dedicated
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 to manual things and acting physically more.
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, I consider both eras have their good sides and bad sides .But technology made today's
life
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 easier than it was ten decades before.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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