You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manage� should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to thank you for a recently organised all-day meeting of my company in your hotel for successful hosting and
also
express the concern about the
food
quality,which we expect will be better in future. Two days back
i
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got the feedback from the participants who joined the meeting.
Although
,they liked the hotel including its environment which was ambience ,great customer service and high internet speed.
Additionally
, they like
conference
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the conference
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hall where the
all day
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meeting
organised
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without any trouble. Unfortunately, they were not happy with the
food
which was served for lunch.
However
,the variety of dishes is very small and some of the
food
is not cooked properly and it tastes as if it was heated in the microwave.
As a result
,it tasted very bad.
In addition
,the staff did not arrange separate sections for vegetarians and non-vegetarians .Anyway,without getting into
further
details, I would suggest just informing your chefs that a bit careful about the
food
that they are serving I wish you a good day and hope you will look into my suggestion Yours faithfully, Rani
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