The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.

The two pie charts compare 5 categories (bus.bicycle, car. train and walking) of

university

Use synonyms

travelling

transportation

Use synonyms

between2004 and 2009. It is noticeable that

proportion

Correct article usage

the proportion

show examples

of

university

Use synonyms

tavelling

Correct your spelling

travelling

Use synonyms

transportation

Correct word choice

and transportation

show examples

car

Fix the agreement mistake

cars

show examples

experienced a

sognificant

Correct your spelling

significant

fall over the

5

Add a hyphen

5-year

show examples

year

Use synonyms

period

while

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

figure for

bus

Fix the agreement mistake

buses

show examples

and

bicycle

Fix the agreement mistake

bicycles

show examples

saw a big rose. In 2009, 51 %

Change preposition

of an

show examples

an

Correct article usage

the

show examples

average

university

Use synonyms

travelling

of

Change preposition

by

show examples

transportation

Use synonyms

on

Change preposition

by

show examples

car

Add an article

the car

show examples

went on which is the largest pie

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

chart

however

Linking Words

by 2009 the figure for

this

Linking Words

category had fallen by 28%.

By contrast

Linking Words

, in terms of

bus

Fix the agreement mistake

buses

show examples

the percentage of

university

Use synonyms

travelling

transportation

Use synonyms

this

Linking Words

category made up33% in 2004, and after 5

Use synonyms

year

Change to a plural noun

years

show examples

this

Linking Words

figure

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

saw a sharp increase

at

Change preposition

to

show examples

46% making it the largest

transportation

Use synonyms

of all.

In the

Change preposition

The

show examples

smallest percentage of vehicles belonged to

bicycle

Fix the agreement mistake

bicycles

show examples

in the first

year

Use synonyms

,

however

Linking Words

, next

year

Use synonyms

period there was a 7% rise in

this

Linking Words

category.