Nowadays, the crime rate among young students is rising significantly. Some individuals believe if teenagers get punishments as adults regardless of age, the number of youth crimes will decrease dramatically. I partially agree with
this
statement,
due to
the fact that both areas provide
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different consequences.
On the one hand, parents do not control their
children
.
As a result
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as
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, games and illegal sites.
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,
according to
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who plays
such
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much cruel, because their mind accepts as
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thing and they do not afraid of blood. Some people
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that government have to punish parents because teenager future prospect will collapse.
On the other hand
, pupils should know how
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is
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. Everyone should be punished equally.
For example
, if punish parents,
children
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between right and wrong. By punishing some students who are involved
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crimes, the government can deliver
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to
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another such young teen
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of wrongdoing.
As a result
, society
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this
idea that it will decrease the crimes.
To conclude
, some people believe if young people did something wrong, they have to answer below the law
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think
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future life will be
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I believe that everyone should be punished equally despite
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age. So,
children
will understand what they are doing wrong.