In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the crime rate among young students is rising significantly. Some individuals believe if teenagers get punishments as adults regardless of age, the number of youth crimes will decrease dramatically. I partially agree with

this

statement,

due to

the fact that both areas provide

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different consequences. On the one hand, parents do not control their

children

.

As a result

, teenagers easily influence by external

factor

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factors

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such

as

internet

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the internet

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, games and illegal sites.

For instance

,

according to

psychologist

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a psychologist

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,

individual

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an individual

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who plays

such

games as CSGO or PUBG

are

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much cruel, because their mind accepts as

usual

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a usual

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thing and they do not afraid of blood. Some people

believes

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that government have to punish parents because teenager future prospect will collapse.

On the other hand

, pupils should know how

badly

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bad

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is

crime

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a crime

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. Everyone should be punished equally.

For example

, if punish parents,

children

will not realize

difference

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the difference

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between right and wrong. By punishing some students who are involved

to

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in

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crimes, the government can deliver

message

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messages

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to

other

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another such young teen

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such

young teen about

consequences

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the consequences

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of wrongdoing.

As a result

, society

support

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this

idea that it will decrease the crimes.

To conclude

, some people believe if young people did something wrong, they have to answer below the law

while

the

other

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others

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think

what

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about what

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children

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children's

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future life will be

.

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like.

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I believe that everyone should be punished equally despite

the

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age. So,

children

will understand what they are doing wrong.