The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.
Overall
, the pie charts give an overview of the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University between 1990 and 2010. In the below paragraphs
I will highlight relevant information and important trends.
In 1990 Business and Computer Science degrees had the same weighting of 30 percentage points. Add a comma
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In contrast
, the Law degree was the least popular with 15 per cent and the Medicine degree came in third place. Each decade Computer Science gained 5 percent making it the overwhelming leader. However
, Medicine displaced Business as the second most prominent field of interest. Finally
, it is important to point out that the share of Law remained constant throughout the decades.
In conclusion, we can clearly observe a trend when rapid technological advancements have contributed massively to the rise of Computer Science graduates, while
the number of people interested in taking a Business degree has considerably diminished.Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on
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