The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.

The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.
Overall
, the pie charts give an overview of the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University between 1990 and 2010. In the below
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I will highlight relevant information and important trends. In 1990 Business and Computer Science degrees had the same weighting of 30 percentage points.
In contrast
, the Law degree was the least popular with 15 per cent and the Medicine degree came in third place. Each decade Computer Science gained 5 percent making it the overwhelming leader.
However
, Medicine displaced Business as the second most prominent field of interest.
Finally
, it is important to point out that the share of Law remained constant throughout the decades. In conclusion, we can clearly observe a trend when rapid technological advancements have contributed massively to the rise of Computer Science graduates,
while
the number of people interested in taking a Business degree has considerably diminished.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentages
  • professions
  • industry demands
  • societal trends
  • gender distribution
  • equality
  • persistent gender gaps
  • job market
  • supply and demand
  • employment challenges
  • technological advancements
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
  • societal shifts
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