Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that the

government

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should conduct scientific

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instead

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of personal organizations. Personally, I would disagree with

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opinion. There are two reasons why I deny

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idea.

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, the private companies will go bankrupt soon if all

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are

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carried out by the

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. It will result in fewer job opportunities and fewer people who choose to pursue their careers in scientific fields.

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, it

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limits the development of novel science and slows down the publishment of scientific literature, which causes an interruption of academic communication.

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, there will be more occupational competition

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the lack of job vacancies if the state performs all experiments.

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, the origin of scientific findings should not be divided by organizations. Both private and public

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institutes are capable of carrying out vital

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topics, and it can allow equal competition as well.

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, I believe governments should

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offer

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support to those companies financially and technically.

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, there are still some advantages if governments take responsibility for

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. The

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is likely to have enough funding for any type of

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, which means the quality of the study can be assured.

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, personal institutes tend to have insufficient budgets and fewer well-maintained facilities. They might

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look for a good reputation which makes them focus on quantity, not quality.

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, misconduct is more common in private

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labs. In conclusion, the

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should not stop the growth of private labs and

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the existence of them could benefit the academic field.

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government led

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labs are more likely to produce high standard studies.