Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that the

government

should conduct scientific

research

instead

of personal organizations. Personally, I would disagree with

this

opinion. There are two reasons why I deny

this

idea.

Firstly

, the private companies will go bankrupt soon if all

research

are

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carried out by the

government

. It will result in fewer job opportunities and fewer people who choose to pursue their careers in scientific fields.

Moreover

, it

further

limits the development of novel science and slows down the publishment of scientific literature, which causes an interruption of academic communication.

Additionally

, there will be more occupational competition

due to

the lack of job vacancies if the state performs all experiments.

Secondly

, the origin of scientific findings should not be divided by organizations. Both private and public

research

institutes are capable of carrying out vital

research

topics, and it can allow equal competition as well.

Besides

, I believe governments should

also

offer

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support to those companies financially and technically.

On the other hand

, there are still some advantages if governments take responsibility for

research

. The

government

is likely to have enough funding for any type of

research

, which means the quality of the study can be assured.

By contrast

, personal institutes tend to have insufficient budgets and fewer well-maintained facilities. They might

also

look for a good reputation which makes them focus on quantity, not quality.

Therefore

, misconduct is more common in private

research

labs. In conclusion, the

government

should not stop the growth of private labs and

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the existence of them could benefit the academic field.

However

, the

government led

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labs are more likely to produce high standard studies.