You have organised to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday explain why you must change your plans suggest alternative arrangements

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Hi Daniel, I writing to you because I am so happy and so excited that our holiday starting next Monday. But I have

also

bad news for you. We have to change our trip to the island.

Last

week I had an incident on the bike and

unfortunately

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my doctor told me that I could not fly by plane for at least two weeks. So I have a great idea. What do you think if we go to the island by the car? The way to our camp is straightforward and not so far away. The way will take

couple

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of hours but I think we will enjoy the trip much more. We will go through the tropical forests and beautiful hills. Daniel, please let me know as soon as possible if you are happy with my idea and I can organise a nice trip to our dream holiday. I

Think

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that

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holiday could be our best time ever. Best regards Peter

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task achievement

Work on improving sentence structure for better clarity. For example, 'I writing to you' should be 'I am writing to you.'

coherence cohesion

Ensure the subject-verb agreement is correct. For example, 'our holiday starting' should be 'our holiday is starting.'

suitable writing tone

Clear and suitable writing tone. The letter feels friendly and appropriate for its purpose.

logical structure

Logical flow of ideas and clarity in suggesting alternative arrangements.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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