You have moved into new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturbed you neighbour. Write a letter to you neighbour. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe your plan for party Invite your neighbour to come.

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Dear Mr and Mrs Kale, I am your just moved now neighbour. I was keen to meet you but, because of business in arranging ,stuff I could not get time. We are a family of four - my husband, two daughters and I. Next week it is my youngest daughter's 2nd birthday and some of our friends were

also

asking for a housewarming

party

. So, we have decided to celebrate both occasions together. We are planning to arrange a small celebration next Saturday evening. There will be a cake cutting at 7.30 pm, followed by dinner at 8.00 pm and

then

there will be a dance. We have planned to play music on our speakers. Though the

party

is for small

group

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it can be noisy. I would like to beg your apology in advance. As we never get a chance to meet you, I would like to invite you to the

party

. I wanted to invite you personally but, it seems a little awkward. So thought to write you

this

letter.It will be our pleasure to serve you, you are requested to come with your family. Looking for our presence at the

party

. Yours faithfully, Jen

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