You have moved into new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturbed you neighbour. Write a letter to you neighbour. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe your plan for party Invite your neighbour to come.

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Dear Mr and Mrs Kale, I am your just moved now neighbour. I was keen to meet you but, because of business in arranging ,stuff I could not get time. We are a family of four - my husband, two daughters and I. Next week it is my youngest daughter's 2nd birthday and some of our friends were

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asking for a housewarming

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. So, we have decided to celebrate both occasions together. We are planning to arrange a small celebration next Saturday evening. There will be a cake cutting at 7.30 pm, followed by dinner at 8.00 pm and

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there will be a dance. We have planned to play music on our speakers. Though the

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is for small

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it can be noisy. I would like to beg your apology in advance. As we never get a chance to meet you, I would like to invite you to the

party

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. I wanted to invite you personally but, it seems a little awkward. So thought to write you

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letter.It will be our pleasure to serve you, you are requested to come with your family. Looking for our presence at the

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. Yours faithfully, Jen

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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