The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how the number of
cases
of
diarrhoea
changed over a period between 1983 and 1992 in Mashhad. It is observed that in the first
year
(1983) the number of
cases
of
diarrhoea
stood at 100 and remained stable until 1985.
This
was followed by a slight increase in two years until it reached approximately 200.
However
, there was a significant drop in 1988 when the figures were 100.
This
downward trend was suddenly broken and the number of
cases
of
diarrhoea
grew up dramatically and showed 400
cases
per
year
.
This
figure maintained unchanged until 1991.
Finally
, in 1992 the
cases
of
diarrhoea
were equal to zero.
Overall
, the proportion of
diarrhoea
in Mashhad
last
year
was the lowest in other years, but the highest result was in 1998 with 400
cases
per
year
.
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