Should voting be compulsory for all citizens or people should have freedom to choose not to vote. What is your opinion?

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Vote

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is needed for the election of

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a political

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party that runs usually every five years. The aim is to elect the best political parties.

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, it sparks arguments

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or not it is compulsory for

people

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to do the voting. The following essay depicts my opinion on

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matter.

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, I might say that every

citizen

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that is

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in their legal year,

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to give their

vote

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. After watching the candidates’ debates or hearing the candidates’ plan, vision and mission,

people

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should have known who would they

vote

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for based on what they have observed. The more

citizen

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vote

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, the more likely the

country

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will have the best candidate to be elected to sit in the

government

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.

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, problems that have arisen will gradually be solved and will bring prosperity to the

citizen

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. Usually, the

government

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distributes the

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vote

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paper based on the total of

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existing

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citizen

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.

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leads us to my second concern, which is

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the blank

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paper.

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, if

people

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do not use their

vote

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, the blank paper will be used by the cheating party to choose their member.

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Country

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will inevitably experience a detrimental effect if

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matter happens. Plenty of demonstrations and catastrophes will occur eventually if the

government

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is filled with someone who is not capable to run the

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.

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,

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vote

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is extremely important for a

citizen

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to do.

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will help the

government

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in running the

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well

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and

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to avoid any unskilled

people

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to sit

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inside the

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. Admittedly, citizens will always have to keep an eye on the

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way of working just to ensure everything is on the right track.