Should voting be compulsory for all citizens or people should have freedom to choose not to vote. What is your opinion?

Vote
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The vote
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is needed for the election of
political
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a political
the political
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party that runs usually every five years. The aim is to elect the best political parties.
However
, it sparks arguments
whether
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about whether
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or not it is compulsory for
people
to do the voting. The following essay depicts my opinion on
this
matter.
Firstly
, I might say that every
citizen
that is
in their legal year,
need
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needs
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to give their
vote
. After watching the candidates’ debates or hearing the candidates’ plan, vision and mission,
people
should have known who would they
vote
for based on what they have observed. The more
citizen
vote
, the more likely the
country
will have the best candidate to be elected to sit in the
government
.
Consequently
, problems that have arisen will gradually be solved and will bring prosperity to the
citizen
. Usually, the
government
distributes the
vote
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voting
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paper based on the total of
legal
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the legal
a legal
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existing
citizen
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citizens
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.
This
leads us to my second concern, which is
a
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the
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misuse
on
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of
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the blank
vote
paper.
For example
, if
people
do not use their
vote
, the blank paper will be used by the cheating party to choose their member.
Country
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The country
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will inevitably experience a detrimental effect if
this
matter happens. Plenty of demonstrations and catastrophes will occur eventually if the
government
is filled with someone who is not capable to run the
country
.
To conclude
,
to give
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giving
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vote
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a vote
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is extremely important for a
citizen
to do.
This
will help the
government
in running the
country
well
,
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and
also
to avoid any unskilled
people
to sit
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inside the
government
. Admittedly, citizens will always have to keep an eye on the
governments’
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government’s
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way of working just to ensure everything is on the right track.
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