More And More Students Are Going Abroad For Higher Studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh disadvantages?
There have been numerous discussions as to the increasing number of pupils leaving for a read-up in a foreign province.
However
, I believe revising over the sea is more beneficial majorly because there is no strike action and also
there are
reliable equipment and approachable lecturers including a conducive environment. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
This
essay will be pinpointing
the profits over the debits.
Wrong verb form
pinpoint
To begin
with, one of the major benefits of learning in a foreign land is to use the number of years speculated for the intended course of study. For instance
, in a rustic like Nigeria where I come from, I might end up learning
Nursing for five (5) years or more Verb problem
studying
instead
of the recommended four (4) years. This
is an outcome of the Association of Student Union Universities (ASUU) strike, which commences whenever they feel there is an urgent need that the Government needs to respond to. This
union forgets that this
action affects their scholar's timing and reduces the student's zeal for learning.
Furthermore
, the pupils tend to get top-notch apparatus during practicals and a conducive environment during lectures. Also
, lecturers in foreign countries, know the value of education. They tend to give their undergraduates attention whenever necessary and needed. For example
, a cousin of mine recently travelled to a foreign land to further
her education. She told a lot of differences and stressed the fact that the majority of her lecturers have got
listening hears, no matter the number of times they are being approached.
In conclusion, Verb problem
apply
it is clear that
studying outside the homey is advantageous over learning in the country. Although
, not all the teachers here in the agrarian are unapproachable. We also
have good and well-mannered instructors in our bucolic who have got a passion for what they are doing.Submitted by bumzyakins on
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task response
Ensure to address the prompt directly and provide a clear thesis statement at the beginning of the essay. Make sure to support your points with examples and explanations that directly relate to the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.
coherence and cohesion
Work on improving the coherence and cohesion by organizing your ideas more cohesively. Use transition words and phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. Check for sentence structure and clarity to enhance overall coherence.
task response
Good use of examples to support your points
task response
Clear explanation of the advantages of studying abroad
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...