In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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People
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who live in rural
areas
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are moving to urban
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, and
as a result
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, the number of
people
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living in rural
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is declining in many countries. In my opinion, I believe that it is a negative development, as urban
areas
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have the same importance as rural
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, which will be discussed in
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essay. On
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hand,
people
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who are living in the countryside believe that moving to the big cities will upgrade their standard of living,
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,
this
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is not always the case. Not only living in a bigger
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means higher income, but
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means higher expenses.
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: in small towns, the means of transportation are limited yet affordable, but, in
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they are more expensive. The cost of living in some cities is triple the cost of living in a rural area. Which for sure may reflect on the standard of living of the family who moved to the
city
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.The effect of these migrations will reflect on us too.
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,
people
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who moved to an urban area from a rural area
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didn’t affect themselves only they affected the whole community. The case is, most of the rural
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have special industries that they are popular with. In Egypt, some villages specialise in handmade carpets,
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others specialise in embroidery and another one specialises in Bamboo products.
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, if those who are living in these villages migrate to the
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, these industries will become extinct over time.
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, Moving from the countryside to the
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is not an unusual event, but it happens usually, and it has a great effect on man and society as a whole. The government should invest in the countryside as well to provide a good standard of living, good education and better healthcare, to help the
people
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stay home and to avoid the consequences of these migrations to the
city
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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