The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The given maps illustrate several proposed changes in the small town called Lslip. southeast area
Overall
, it is cleared
that a ring Replace the word
clear
road
will be establised
and the main Correct your spelling
established
road
will be transfer
to Change the verb form
be transferred
an
pedestrian zone.
Looking for the map as it is now, there is a main Change the article
a
road
Correct pronoun usage
that runs
runs
through Wrong verb form
running
of
the Change preposition
apply
towm
from east to west. Correct your spelling
town
In addition
, a park is situated on
Change preposition
in
Add an article
the
while
a school settled on
the southwest . After development, the main Change preposition
in
road
will be a pedestrian street and vehicles will drive in a dual carriageway which is around the town centre.
Furthermore
, shops now are placed in
Change preposition
on
the
both Remove the article
apply
side
of the main Fix the agreement mistake
sides
road
, and housing
area is south of these establishments. In the second picture, stores on the north of the Correct article usage
the housing
pedistrian
street will be replaced by a bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing Correct your spelling
pedestrian
while
shops of
Change preposition
on
south
will remain the same place. Add an article
the south
Additionally
, it seems that the size of a
park will be reduced for more accommodations, and the school will be the only building Correct article usage
the
which
situated Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
Change preposition
apply
the
outside of the ring Correct article usage
apply
road
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